The Good Guy Always Loses Ch. 01

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She made her way to the exit and I called out to her as I sobbed, she looked back, concerned, but just walked out and closed the door almost the whole way, leaving it open a small crack.

I ran up to it to catch up to her, but heard a car screech up in front of the house. I hid myself from view behind the door, but could see everything clearly, and I also distinctly heard Todd's deep, annoying voice.

"Aha there's my Sugar-Pussy!" he shouted excitedly.

"Shhh Todd... not so loud," Jenny replied quietly, sounding exhausted.

I saw him jump out of the car, "Hey... how's my little fuck-doll doing?" he asked, holding her face up to his.

'Jesus,' I thought. It was repulsive to hear the way he talked to her. I'd never treat her so disrespectfully. I could see and hear the sound of kissing, and saw them embracing and their pink tongues intertwining. Him, being much larger than her, had to bend over to meet her. It honestly looked a little ridiculous, and I couldn't imagine how he would have sex with her without snapping her in half.

Once they finished he asked, "So my pussy's all ok?"

She replied, "ugh... come on, let's just leave, it's been a long day."

"Hey," he said, "Teeny dick been givin' you problems babe? Cuz you know I can go in there and sort his useless ass out now, don't you?" he said.

"Todd, let's just go..." I heard her say, walking towards the car, while he remained behind.

"Hey Pencil-dick!" He shouted, "Angel-face here is my little slut now, you hear? And I've been milking this this sweetie real hard, all night, every night." He laughed.

"TODD!" Jenny exclaimed, "Get back in the car!" she hissed.

"I'mma pump all her holes up with my cum every fucking night till she's leaking out her ears and nose!" He bellowed.

"Stop it Todd!" she shouted under her breath.

"Alright sugar relax, just making sure fag boy here gets the message." Then I watched him run back to his car, and jump in. "Give me another kiss sweet-tits," he said softly.

She giggled playfully and leaned over. They drove away after that, and I sobbed on the floor.

"Jennnnyyyyyy..." I cried into the carpet.

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 2...

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AnonymousAnonymous13 days ago

That is why you don't get into relationships without experience. You're too naive. On the other hand, logic suggests you kick her ass to the curb and disown your bitch of a sister. But again, lack of experience throws his naivete into full force and he can't think logically.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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This was so hot. The premise is really good and I’m excited for chapter 2. I would love to see Stacey and Jenny in a threesome with Todd, and just completely crush Jeff’s soul.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Poor baster

This is just sicking

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamalmost 5 years ago
Being a small dick sissy

I know exactly how Jeff feels. I have loved so many girls but they all wanted nothing to do with my tinny member so I grew content with their company and becoming their girlfriend as they fucked my friends. We take what we can and live with it. I do hope Jeff gets to experience Todd's magnificent cock in the next instalment. Learn to enjoy being able to serve his love and they men she has sex with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
It Is All About Humiliating Jeff

For Jenny it is all about the size of Todd's penis and humiliating Jeff. It has nothing to do with love. For Todd is is about stealing Jenny away from Jeff and humiliating Jeff. It has nothing to do with love. If Jeff would take himself out of the mix, Todd would move onto his next conquest and leave Jenny to a life of promiscuity and sexually transmitted diseases. Jeff no longer has a sister. It is pretty obvious that Jeff and his sister didn't come from the same man. The question is which one is the bastard child. Maybe we will find out in future stories.

bayernpeter1bayernpeter1about 6 years ago
Are you that stupid or is it only that crap story??

What a bunch of crap!! All he has to do throw the slut out, get a divorce and be happy!! So whats your point?? You want to write for pervert brain sick ones called cucki and not for the normal readers?? So be aware your positive feedback will mostly be from perverts they will applaud! But think about: monkeys will also applaud if they are trained long enough!

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
I THINK TODDY BETTER WORRY

there is the Junk Yard Dog theory working here, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Agonizing

Todd is a real tough guy, but I wonder if he's bullet proof. Hmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

That's when you secretly record you fucking her then put it all over the Internet and send it to her family and everyone at school lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good guy loses

Because that's what you get for dating the biggest bitch on the planet. No self-respecting woman would ever do that shit irl, its' only the worst fucking cunts out there. And Jenny is a cunt. So is Stacey. Good guy should kill Todd, bury his body, then sort out the other parasites in his life. Or kill himself if he can't bring himself to do that, it's not like any fucking person actually gives a shit about him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
lmfao

this is the most pathetic shit ive ever read in my life

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