All Comments on 'The Grateful Virus Ch. 02'

Really good start. I read part 1 also. Original concept, well written, with believable characters. Hope you can keep it going.

Not only is the story intersting and stimulating, but the visus' internal dialogue makes me smile every time.

With Anon the "virus" talking to itself makes me Smile. Now the Virus has to get Jim's Wife Pregnant. and get her to accept him being with other Female's. But considering the Virus it should be interesting.