All Comments on 'The Great Outdoors'

Loving Mistress. Beautiful submission. Thank you.

Most enjoyable it was, too - thank you.

I wondered what a 'share' was. but I think ( from your text) of it as a long sausage that penetrates both sexes. I hope I am right.

Love to read about boys getting their just deserts.

Love Jane

Thank you for your kind comments, I'm glad you've enjoyed this short story.

Jane, a Share is a brand of dildo, very similar to the better known Feeldoe; a harness-less 'strap-on', one end sitting in the wearer's vagina and/or anus depending on model, leaving the main shaft protruding from between her thighs. Highly recommended!

Good job;-) You've already gotten lots of comments too I see, which I'm glad for

Beautifully written. Enough to want to hear more of their future exploits! Such a woman would be a treasure! Now, greater description of these two.

Makes me want to enjoy the summer in the great outdoors! :)

A really exquisite balance of tenderness and domination with an exhibitionistic frisson. Just right. Thank you.

A little technical in some of the wording, but overall a lovely little story. Her affection for her boy and their mutual attraction is very clear...they obviously are both having a great time! :D

Sexy and fun.

perfect life

LOVELY.....