by steve w
Your use of the English language is remarkable. I seldom read Literotica in which the author has such a command of words that are more fascinating than the story they have written. Please keep up the good work.
hi steve
i don't know if you will ever even see this because i realize it's been a long time since you have posted anything! i just had to tell you that i think you tell some amazing stories in a really unforgettable way! thanks for writing these stories so i could be inspired by your visions! i hope you are happy and doing what you do so damn well-- writing!! good wishes!!
I've read most of your other work, enjoying it for it's pure lust and fire, even though the subject matter tends to be a bit far from me. I loved this story. The subtle tones you portray that I can see link back to some little sluts ass is superb. Don't stop writing.
harierhawk@aol.com
Maybe it's personal, but I don't like reading stories, that described like this: "He does it, she does that". It's nice to talk like that while making love to your partner, but it's boring to read on site with stories.