All Comments on 'The Greenhouse'

by Artifal

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foxyfowlerfoxyfowleralmost 4 years ago
Wonderful

I have read this chapter and awaiting the next one it is very interesting and different and I did enjoy reading this chapter and await the next chapter hope it will not be to long thank you Artifal. xx

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 4 years ago

This story almost belongs in a science fiction category. But I thoroughly enjoyed it. Will there be more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interestng story

Lots of good potential. I personally wish there was less talking about other things during the sex scene. Also more filler would be cool. They just kind of met, fucked then were like "you're my girlfriend turn into a plant for me", all in the span of an hour. Might be interesting to see them get to know eachother, working hard to recurrate the syrum instead of just finding it already made... stuff like that. But still an enjoyable story

jth215-2jth215-2almost 4 years ago
To the greenhouse

Loved it... Hope there's more, if not we'll have to imagine it... Thanks!

RastanuraRastanuraalmost 4 years ago
Sci Fi

As a life long reader of Sci Fi and Fantasy, yours is a pretty good idea. If we could just grow what we needed for fantastic sex, sorry for the pun but it goes with Sci Fi, what a wonderful world it would be.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Greenhouse

I liked your story too. - wonderful plot, wish it could happen to me. Open to continue in do some more. Please. 3

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