All Comments on 'The Guardian'

good start, please continue

Great tempo and very sensual indeed! Hopefully you'll have multiple follow ups with the same writing skill.

5 stars was that good.

Among so many stories that are trivial descriptions of banal

sexual acts finally a good piece of elegant true "erotism"

so precious because so rare.

Hope for more.Compliments.

As someone else commented, this sort of writing truly is rare among erotic literature. The author is a phenomenal writer who understands that eroticism and sex are as much in the psyche as in the body. Moreover, it's on thing to understand that, and another to be intelligent and talented enough to make art out of it. In more prosaic terms, this story makes me wet my fucking pants. Please continue it!

Your description of the slow seduction is really well written. It sucked me in during the brief time it took me to read. The only regret I felt was when I reached the end. Please continue!

I came across this little gem by accident, the best thing I've read on this page. This author - male or female is a true artist, simply incredible! Thanks for the joyride!B

Absolutely captured the nuances of exquisite domination.

You gave hints of more to come - I’m dying for a follow up! Please continue! Where does it end? Great writing!!

That's still the best piece of femdom I've ever come accross and I've read quite a few!!

Good premise.

Definitely too short. Ends too soon.

An editor is needed.

No once does she do anything to his body except allow him to suck her nipple (and insert a finger into his mouth). Sad.

Four stars.