by musecues
You really can weave a story. I must applaud you for keeping me this interested in your story line. I am beginning to understand the characters better but I do wish you had written more for chapter 3! Please write faster! I am guessing that chapter 4 will reveal more things to us! I'm dying to knowwwwwww.....
I knew you were going to intro a villain sooner or later! Hahaha. This villain is intriguing... Really enjoyed the story so far. Looking forward to more ;)
I love this story! I wish that it was complete so that i could read it to the end... I am eagerly awaiting more chapters!!!! Thanks for sharing with us!
Your characters are really warming up to each other. I wish I could read the continuation now... I hope you're already in the process of writing it =) I think this is the only story of its kind here. Really great plot.
Need i say more? One of the best stories. I'm looking forward to your next installment
I loved the macdonald scene! It's so cute! I'm so happy you finally uploaded the 3rd chapter... but why only 2 parts? =( Must write more!
this story is really different from the rest.... i love it. pls write more so i can read it continuously.
I think the past two chapters were the most formative and descriptive of the lot. Your characters sizzle and... I am looking forward to your next installment.
Ella just reminds me of Rihanna's song. I've been waiting for you to post a story... it's been a week now! Hahahaha. hope you're not tied up with school or lost your ideas! oh no...