by svplgsmslm
Wow. The guy with the red nails is such a well crafted villain. I hope you have more stories of him trapping victims in the works. Origin etc. So good.
Best story in years!
I'm very interested in finding more about the red nail man. Would be hard not to fall into that web with how you have written it. More victims would be fantastic!
Well constructed story. Origin story plz! So much more interesting than the stardard pendant hypnotism. Red golden nails is something that would catch you off guard but intrigue you. Force you to watch. For that reason it makes a better story.
I think I would have been one of the submissive one's with this character. The buildup is too good not to be. The nails, the movement, the directness, the kiss, the venom, the numbness that disappears at the right time. The man with the gloves is my new favorite.
Please do more about this mysterious man. I need to read about more victims that were lured in by the red-nailed man.
This story with prolonged foreplay would be 10/10. Or an alternate ending with the main character becoming a permanent slave to the man with red nails after the orgasm. Bar scene up to the kiss is perfect.