by Outsidetraveller
This was an unreadable mess. You told us what his emotions were instead of letting us discern it from the conversation.
Same old same old pathetic skank whore and pathetic cuck story. Nothing new and very boring except for brain dead cucks.
When a story can't even garner a rating of 2 you know it sucks. Less than one follower per story, dismal. You should quit while you're ahead.
didn't make sense. Sounds like she already messes around with other guys and obviously had messed around with this guy and kept in contact and met afterwards. SO why is she hiding stuff and acting all like she needs permission? It sounds like all she needs is really to check in if they had plans for the weekend and if not she was going someplace to have sex with this guy, again.
The hottest thing to happen to me was sharing my wife with a single neighbor who had a big thick cock. My wife fell in love with his big cock. I enjoyed being a cuck and so turned on when she told me her pussy belonged to him. She loves his cock more than my penis.
only quoting half the dialogue is weird, distracting and just lazy. Course, why care, when it's more of the usual cuck and skank fare?
throw her out! we all know where this mess is going. she married and talks to him 3-4 times a day. And husband needs to have a serious, physical discussion with him. oh, also he needs to smash her phone!
You're doing fine, never mind the bollocks. Looking forward for your ongoing stories. I like the playfulness in this one.
Somewhere between pig shit and "I wanna be out of the closet".
Go back to pick lint from your ass crack, the world would appreciate it.
And I love the writers using their anons to claim they've been through the same thing and love being a fucking sperm burping homosexuals...I mean cucks. Oh wait thats the same thing, isnt it!!
I get it. Sometimes a girl wants and needs a hung, strange cock to fuck her into a blissful coma. It happens to me a few times a year, and my husband lovingly acquiesces to my need. Expand your story.
did she or didn't she; she is definitely hiding something and is obviously a liar
So, when MC is speaking, you just drop the dialogue quotes. How confusing and just bad writing. Like a baseball umpire with "his" strike zone.