All Comments on 'The Gypsy and the Vagabond'

I loved the story and although the ending was fine from a literary view, it disappointed me. I wanted him to stay in her life.

please add another chapter the gyspy has to end up with the vagabond pleaseee its such a promising story

Love it. Very brave, to take it in the unexpected and perhaps less "favored" direction; obviously, readers want the gypsy to wind up with the vagabond. You enter into the territory of Literature by making that writing choice. Bravo! (Though I have to confess, I'd love to see a sequel where these two would get back together.)

I love it. It's the perfect balance of romance and the reality of real life. There is nothing more heroic than putting someone else's well-being before your own. Very real. It couldn't have been written better. Keep up your literary greatness, I would love to see more from you.

Thank you so much for putting a well-written, thought-provoking story together for everyone to share. I enjoyed the fluidity, the detail and the imagery. Very well done.

This is the most romantic beatiful story. You must write more of this gypsy's travels. I was heart broken that the vagabond did not stay.

What a sad story that the when they finally shared their love and lust with each other they loose each other.

Very well written, the last paragraph definetely brought a tear to my eye, but loved the story none the less....