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Click hereFrom across the street, the vagabond had watched the reunion with wistful eyes. His purpose was done: she had her family now and would no longer need him as she had before. Fighting back a lone tear in the corner of his eye, he smiled at the young gypsy and said quietly, "Good luck to you, my sweet Valentine, and good-bye." And with that, he walked down the alley and disappeared through the meandering crowd.
Very well written, the last paragraph definetely brought a tear to my eye, but loved the story none the less....
What a sad story that the when they finally shared their love and lust with each other they loose each other.
This is the most romantic beatiful story. You must write more of this gypsy's travels. I was heart broken that the vagabond did not stay.
Thank you so much for putting a well-written, thought-provoking story together for everyone to share. I enjoyed the fluidity, the detail and the imagery. Very well done.
I love it. It's the perfect balance of romance and the reality of real life. There is nothing more heroic than putting someone else's well-being before your own. Very real. It couldn't have been written better. Keep up your literary greatness, I would love to see more from you.
Love it. Very brave, to take it in the unexpected and perhaps less "favored" direction; obviously, readers want the gypsy to wind up with the vagabond. You enter into the territory of Literature by making that writing choice. Bravo! (Though I have to confess, I'd love to see a sequel where these two would get back together.)
please add another chapter the gyspy has to end up with the vagabond pleaseee its such a promising story
I loved the story and although the ending was fine from a literary view, it disappointed me. I wanted him to stay in her life.