All Comments on 'The Half-Succubus'

by Krombomich

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Carl_BradfordCarl_Bradfordalmost 2 years ago

Interesting concept, looking at life from the POV of the irresistible sex object for whom it has become very old and inconvenient. This makes the reader genuinely feel sorry for the young woman, whose only chance of making friends is to oblige them by causing other male figures to assaulting her. Somewhere out there must be the male equivalent, who would be glad to be friends with her?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

As a connoisseur of perversion, I thought I'd seen it all by now, but this is new to me. And well written too. Great stuff.

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