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StoryguyStoryguyover 1 year ago

Your plot is going well. You seriously need to use an editor or at the very least a proofing tool, like Grammarly. It takes away from your story. All of the capitalization errors and punctuation errors are distracting.

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Writing is a hobby of mine. I focus mainly on Sci-Fi and Fantasy stories. Currently working on what I hope to be a long-running series.

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