All Comments on 'The Hand-Off'

Bravo!

As a woman, you are excused, but it seems you are unaware that ejaculate does not come from the testicles, but comes from the prostate.

Great story. I like your whole approach. Your every story is subtlety sexy

nice story!!!

Lovely. 5*****

A beautiful short read that speaks volumes!

Excellent

Interesting premise.

But not enough teasing/edging of his cock and balls.

Needed more dialog during the 'massage'. How did it feel? How close was he to cumming? Did he want to cum? He needed to tell her when he was getting close.

Needed more teasing of his asshole.

Needed at least discussion about whether he was attracted to her body. What about it was a turn on?

Did he watch porn? What kind?

Three stars.

That was pretty good. I agree with Anon though, could've done with a bit more detail.