This was great! I loved the working naivete in a slightly more fantastical setting. It was also nice to see not everyone in this story being completely innocent. PUHLEASE! Do another of this story.
Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...