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by jsmangis
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Anonymousover 7 years agoToo short
8 paragraphs DO NOT make a story.
No build up, poor and insufficient dialogue and descriptions of sex are risible; not my type of story, at all.
Anonymousover 7 years agoYeah boy!
You keep writin' 'em, and I'll keep readin' 'em...and givin' 'em 5's.
tabbymidniteover 7 years agovery good.. lots of detail
Thank you....... Bring on Zelda.. But please make your stories at least two pages. The good read goes by so fast. Thank you very much a turn on.. Wish you were my neighbor
Anonymousabout 6 years agoHeld my interest
But still too formulaic. You need some surprises in the plot.
chytownover 5 years agoGreat Storyline****
This series is going to be a fun read, Thanks for sharing.
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