All Comments on 'The Happy Moo Cow'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A little too graphic.

For my taste it should be toned down

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I'm glad to see her body not caring about her opinion didn't result in her mindlessly craving his cock, but it would've been better if she explicitly came and we saw the psychological fallout.

Also, as a minor aesthetic gripe, it's only just long enough to get the last sentence on a second page. It either needs to be trimmed down to one page or expanded some to give the second page something to do.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Still one of the best stories on this site. I'd love a second chapter.

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I put words to page. This is a hobby, a diversion. Every once in a while a little story or scenario makes it's way into my mind. After it gets refined and reworked, eventually it makes it's way here. Sometimes fantasies of control. Sometimes the joy of coming together. Hopefu...