All Comments on 'The Hard Body Shop Clerk Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Unworthy of comment

All except the first paragraph of page one in chapter one

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I want to be Cori

Fab story... one chapter better than the last... getting me so wet. Cori definately is a lucky girl and what I wouldn't give for a job like hers... maybe there is a slut in me after all. xox

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Stupid

A stupid story that doesn't need to go on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

A real live, living and breathing fuck doll. I try and find it sexy, because she doesn't mind being treated like that...but, I just can't. Probably a good story for women into being treated like things with no brain.

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.