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All Comments on 'The Hard Body Shop Clerk Ch. 10'

by dlsloan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Every thing after chapter 1 is a waste of my time

Even it was at best a 50 percenter

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Same flamer?

Is that the same hater reading all these chapters?

libertarianlibertarianover 17 years ago
It must be the same flamer

What I don't understand is why he keeps reading it if he doesn't like it. After all, dlsloan keeps the same basic theme throughout the story. I think it is well written, and it has very hot sex throughout.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
not bad but....

despite the guys saying she isn't a slut, she continues to become more and more of a slut. As much dick as she is sucking she is a slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Get's this the every time I see it raise it's ugly

a big fat '0'. Hey I think I'll vote again and again and again.....

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.