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All Comments on 'The Hard Body Shop Clerk Ch. 10'

by dlsloan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Get's this the every time I see it raise it's ugly

a big fat '0'. Hey I think I'll vote again and again and again.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
not bad but....

despite the guys saying she isn't a slut, she continues to become more and more of a slut. As much dick as she is sucking she is a slut

libertarianlibertarianover 17 years ago
It must be the same flamer

What I don't understand is why he keeps reading it if he doesn't like it. After all, dlsloan keeps the same basic theme throughout the story. I think it is well written, and it has very hot sex throughout.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Same flamer?

Is that the same hater reading all these chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Every thing after chapter 1 is a waste of my time

Even it was at best a 50 percenter

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.