by MosheDovit
Part 1 Anywhere???
I don't see it on your profile submission list.
It might help make sense of the story,.
Sorry. The first part is published as “The Older They Cum”. I screwed up the title. ):
Good premise.
A bit too fast.
Needed to slow down.
How did his asshole get "lubricated"? No mention of any lubricant.
The women don't tease Connor with any of their body parts. They don't make him imagine how good it would be for him to eat pussy and/or fuck them.
Four stars.
Still some errors, ...while I consult ... should be either ... while we consult ... or ... while I consult Anna..., or better yet ... while we talk amongst each other.