All Comments on 'The Harlot'

by TheRogerQuine

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 2 years ago

Surprisingly good! This was a great story about love, lust and the secrets we keep.

Thank you for writing.

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 2 years ago

Interesting story how someone can be damaged by CSA and not realise it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Could someone please give the tart a nudge in front of a moving lorry?

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Not great, but an interesting story about an unrepentant whore.

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraover 2 years ago

Interesting... you definitely pivoted and spun a decent and decidedly different tale. Very nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, a nice short story of a woman that likes what she wants. So refreshing. Anyway I would have liked it just a bit more that she really did take out that first guy and loved it (but Lit would not like snuff kind of story lines) but in a short passage of watching the blood spurt as she walks away.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 2 years ago

Funny, and enjoyable

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Prolific author of erotic literature. You can call them dirty books, if you prefer. They're all on Amazon anyway. Some on Kobo.