by TheRogerQuine
Surprisingly good! This was a great story about love, lust and the secrets we keep.
Thank you for writing.
Interesting... you definitely pivoted and spun a decent and decidedly different tale. Very nice job.
Well, a nice short story of a woman that likes what she wants. So refreshing. Anyway I would have liked it just a bit more that she really did take out that first guy and loved it (but Lit would not like snuff kind of story lines) but in a short passage of watching the blood spurt as she walks away.