All Comments on 'The Hat'

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

I liked it - great fantasy. Only problem; it seems to be leading to a surprize ending, which could have been fun. Still, maybe in part two?

As noted above, this is a good story with an unusual point of view. Hope you continue it, and from the narrator's point of view, but with more graphic descriptions of the sex acts.

I suspect, as the previous poster notes, there may be a surprise in store. Frankly, it doesn't make sense anyone would rent out a device like this for $100 or $50. Maybe it only works for one person, maybe it controls the wearer too.

Anyway, looking forward to more of this story. It's too good to end at this point.