by Alca
Great work! It builds really well on your first chapter and I'm really looking forward to the next!
This is great work, the whole Ex Cumming to the fact her ex fucked her best friend and she gets off to it. Honestly good story telling, It seems that the hate fuckers aren’t completely done yet and the idea of fucking her at the party is hot. You wrote a great chapter. Very compelling and it definitely draws the listener in as he recants his story of what happened the night he fucked her. You are talented and this was great, well done x