All Comments on 'The Healer and the Werewolf Ch. 01'

by BeautifulSeductress

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
OH YES PLEASE!

LOTS OF POTENTIAL PLEASE CARRY ON WITH THIS STORY

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I like how it ends ... way too short though and you keep jumping between present and past tense. Please don’t do that it takes away from the story. That said, I like the premise and want more please.

kinkboikinkboiover 3 years ago

Great idea, bug tease of a first "chapter". Please choose a tense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Choose a tense. Just one.

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