All Comments on 'The Healer Pt. 03'

This was such a good chapter!!! In a die hard #teamquell fan, but this really did make me feel pity for the older brother. It really would suck when all your family members are centaurs and you the only human. I hope he finds someone to make him happy. But Coral should really choose quell

Okay, now Coral is just being a Slut. First, the governors son, Then quell, Now his brother vadim. Who's next ? The King ? The Doctor? Or maybe the wadin, the Younger brother ? I know,maybe she'll try the Queen. At the Start it was kind of Romantic, now it's just turning into a sex free for all. I agree with AdmiralBird.

Just want to reiterate what a fine writer you are. Thank you for writing for us. IMO both brothers should steer clear of her at her age. If she truly felt strongly about Quell, she would not have fallen so quickly for his brother. It speaks highly of the brothers honor that neither took her, but she is being exposed to new stimuli now in a bigger town and will be infatuated with many things. The brothers should dial it back to friendship to save a broken heart. I certainly wouldn’t trust her in marriage lol

I think it's an interesting twist, but I dont think she'd have done that with how strong her feelings are for Quell. But I know there needs to be conflict as well. Still very absorbed in this story! Can't wait to see what happens next

Ok, I know she isnt technically married yet, but she has come to realize more her love for Quell, so I dont see why she would play around with his brother. She literally let him finger her when she already has quell. I loved your story, but now you honestly broke my heart with making coral, my once strong independent woman, into some easy tart. You even had her come out if her scientific experiment to suck his dick, just let me down in this chapter. Ill keep reading, just kinda spoiled it though.

#TeamQuell

Although I’m extremely disappointed with her decision to fool around with his brother, I’m REALLY hoping that she keeps to Quell.

Another great chapter. keep them coming! She really needs to decide which brother she wants as shes turning into a promiscuous wanton hussy.

The next part has been submitted and is pending approval--I appreciate the turmoil I have caused for all of you! Bear with me, this story is far from over.

Haha she a wonton in bed ! If it’ll ever be a Coral and Vadim love end relationship, I’ll ship it. Vadim is so cute.

But Quell would be devastated, or would be Less passive in courting Coral since she’s got some action with Vadim. It’s very interesting where the story is going towards since coral isn’t interested in courting will she meet someone new and have sexual relations with him? Hmm can’t wait for the next update!

Really disappointing.

Either Quell is going to fall in love with the centaur the king matched with Vadim, or she is going to get to keep them both. She will marry Quell and get to have Vadim still, so Quell can rule as King, and their centaur son will be able to take the throne, but they will have some human children as well. I hope she gets to keep them both. Please please please!

Ugh all that built-up just for a skank in a love triangle. I demand a time refund

Power to coral! Let her choose who wins her heart not just who saw her first. I hope she picks Quell though lol