by AfterDusk
I'm so happy to see another chapter. I thought you'd given up on the series. I am anxious for the next few chapters
Missed you during this hiatus. I love the story. I hope your muse returns soon. This is a interesting and charming story. Thank you for the warning before the dark turn of events.
I know you were worried about the length of this chapter but I think it was great! Quell is such a jerk and Vadim is right... Quell doesn't deserve Coral. I really can see no future where everyone ends up happy which is sad but I really hope you have a way to do it! Maybe while you're figuring out what to write for these 4 characters you could possibly give us an update on Margaret and her soon to be mate? :)
I am so happy! Finally after 5 months I get to read this. Thank you. As always, I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter. The length is just right, don't worry. 👍
So happy for this story to continue! I am thoroughly enthralled with the characters and plot. I cried when they cried and felt anxious, and giddy, and excited etc... it's very rare for a story to reach me and move me. Add in the fantasy/scifi aspect and it's that much better! Love it!! Please continue!
Yes, there is quite a bit more left to this story, I just haven't had as much time to dedicate to writing as I'd like. I'll get more posted before the end of the year.
beforehand i am Dutch so forgive my spelling. The story graps me by the throat, I have to restrian myself not to crache the screen and walk away, carefull not to break things wen i get angerd, yet i come back to read more because you write....That Good. and i hope to fore more. Thank You. Kees
Wow.. I read the entire thing. Hopefully it will be finished soon
Great story, so far. I really don't like to read a story that's NOT FINISHED! That's why I won't rate it. So please finish it.
" AfterDusk..wrote..over 1 year ago..Author
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Yes, there is quite a bit more left to this story, I just haven't had as much time to dedicate to writing as I'd like. I'll get more posted before the end of the year. "
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I am glad to hear that . Such a compelling tale .
I’m just blown away by how good this is. You have real talent, I read constantly and this is one of the best things I’ve encountered in years. That includes erotica and vanilla fiction, bravo
Please finish this story! Or publish it as a novel! I care so much about these characters and I want to know what happens to them
I am so disappointed to find this is another abandoned unfinished story. I think I will stop reading multi-chapter stories because this has become a recurring frustration.