All Comments on 'The Health Club Ch. 02'

What a great story. Good use of details and a very hot, patient telling. I've never been too keen on "big cock" stories -- seems too much an author fantasy most of the time -- but this one mattered to the story. Can't wait for more! I mean, fucking a mother while her kids are outside the door...

Loved the story. I want to read more about Dave and all the MILFs.

Loved the story so far. I would like to read more about Andrea--she should have an encounter with our hero. I would love to read about him taking care of the women in the club.

keep up the good work.

where is part 3?

Want more chapters to this. Surely there is more to the health club than the sauna. What about Andrea? When does he get to "greet" Barbara? Sure would love to read chapters 3,4,5, and 6. Thanks for a wonderful story.

part 3??

please write more

Makes one wish they could join such an erotic health club--helps to have an outstanding cock. Like your writing.

no part 3?

Shame that this author vanished almost ten years ago. I really loved Jane's interactions with Dave, the way she confidently teased him. I would've loved to see Dave interact with Jane more, especially if she's as busty as her mom but more open to overtly teasing him. She's around his age, so it feels like it'd be a really cute relationship.