All Comments on 'The Heat'

There's loads of little mistakes here and there that an editor could fix up for you. The story is interesting so it's worth doing IMO! Also, making something 100 degrees means that it's just over 1 degree more than body temp so it's unlikely to even be noticed by most people. You might change that over to increasing the existing temp by a few hundred degrees.

"Glots"? Did you mean "Glocks"?

Mini shot guns? Did you mean "sawed off barrel shot guns" or "410 gauge"?

Stopped reading at that point.

Gave it one star because there wasn't a lower rating. Please stop writing. The literate world will thank you.