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Anonymousabout 4 years agoDidn’t work for me
Writing a good story in the second person is difficult, as it requires complete identification of the reader with the subject. Writing a good story with one- sentence paragraphs is difficult, as it doesn’t flow well.
Writing a good story coupling the two together is almost an impossibility.
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