All Comments on 'The Hen Party'

At least no one fucked you in the ass.

but a bit to short for me.

.... for the abbreviated version of what may become a story.I'd post a zillion Ideas if I thought it satisfied any readers.But it won't.Pistolpackinpete

Could have been fleshed out more, and it's riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. Editors are a godsend for writers.