All Comments on 'The Henry Letters Pt. 03'

Who are you writing to? Us, the audience of us as participants?

This is why you write in first person or 3rd person, never second.

Sorry if it wasn't clear, but this is actually a letter I had written to another person. It wasn't a story in the typical sense, as the reader is intended to be the recipient. So in my opinion, writing in "2nd person perspective" was completely appropriate in this case.