All Comments on 'The Hero worth a Million Men'

It is a shame nothing past this has been released. This story has potential. Solid back and forth in conversation, great story building and reasonable setting. There were minor details which alluded to more like Sunshine speech of one to follow or the character friend's tie to sunshine which could act as a nod to later story. This wasnt simply event A to B then quick cut to C but a wave of writing to express something cohesive.