by Dannie81
I’m not sure if I want more. It’s as complete as it needs to be. Any more is just comparing against imagination.
I’ll certainly be reading more from your catalog.
5*
Tc
The story is great, the writing is first rate, it’s hotter than a Ghost Pepper, and it provides the base for more stories with the same characters in different scenarios. That is a great package and I hope you write a few more based on this beginning. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Awesome story! I agree. It should be left there and not added to. Any addition would just dilute the amazing story that it is. At this point everyone is on their way to getting what they wanted and are happy.
I loved this story but, like the othere commentator, I think it needs another chapter or epilogue.