All Comments on 'The Hike of Many Peaks'

Keep this storygoing. I'm sure the four leaders can teach the other four far more.

Maybe they could do a Brokeback Mountain and have a yearly anniversary trip where they all teach the others what they have learned in the previous year.

almost a caricature of a story, no depth - although it shows promise. Rather than feeling like I was there, it reads like a news story of what happened. Good beginning, good story, just needs more development.

You have a good basic plot, but as another commenter notes, it reads like a news story, perhaps in the business pages. Readers get involved when the story shares the characters' feelings. "He did this, then she did that" just doesn't keep us interested no matter what the subject matter might be. Please try again, the next time adding how a character would feel, for example, the first time another person sexually touched his or her spouse.

Way to confusing. I gave up sorting out who was who and what the hell was happening.