All Comments on 'The Hockey Team Pt. 01'

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delphi604delphi60412 months ago

Crisp prose. Excellent pacing. Very well done!

Celastrus_orbiculatusCelastrus_orbiculatus9 months ago

this could be a great intro to either Marina seducing other new women, or the POV moving through life having sexy times with women on the sly.

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