All Comments on 'The Holiday Romance'

I agree with ur comments. Please understand that when I wrote this story, it was meant to be a brief sexual encounter with an even briefer storyline. It ended up being slightly more than that. I was pressed for time, so I admit I did rush the ending. It certainly leaves off suggesting a sequel at a later date. Who knows...

I have various other story lines running around in my head that I want to put down when i get a chance, so stay tuned.

Thanks for your comments! Their very helpful!

I agree with ur comments. Please understand that when I wrote this story, it was meant to be a brief sexual encounter with an even briefer storyline. It ended up being slightly more than that. I was pressed for time, so I admit I did rush the ending. It certainly leaves off suggesting a sequel at a later date. Who knows...

I have various other story lines running around in my head that I want to put down when i get a chance, so stay tuned.

Thanks for your comments! Their very helpful!

That was an interesting story not much romance that I could tell. It is shame that it is already over and it was just getting started.

good story but sad it ends here.