All Comments on 'The Homecoming'

by EnchantressSmiles

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AbctoyAbctoyover 2 years ago

What a great Loving Wife Story! 5*

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 3 years ago
What travestry!

A story about a real loving wife in Loving Wives? Why, it's too hard to believe!

Lovely story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you. 5*****

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Good story, but it needs more. You're on the way to a good sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I’ll Watch It

“It” being the whole story. Because no way was this a story, this was pretty much just a thirty second tv commercial for an hour long show on HBO or the Playboy Channel. Nice teaser, though.

laptopwriterlaptopwriterabout 6 years ago
How did I miss this?

This was well done. I would have preferred a little more explanation as to where he'd been and why the delay but it wasn't really necessary. Excellent piece.

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