All Comments on 'The Honeymoon'

by steamer5139

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janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
Your submission...

...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Throughly Enjoyable!

What a delicate beautiful way of describing a Honeymoon. Besides the very intimate descriptions of the sensual activity, there was a word picture tour of the Bay Area which I enjoyed immensely. So very well written! Very pleasant read!

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