All Comments on 'The Horniest Girl in the Universe'

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Hambone371Hambone371over 2 years ago

The ending seemed chopped off and unsatisfying.

abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

Agreed with Hambone, the pacing didn't stay consistent. (...And, "slap me," as a surprise during sex? Really?)

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A long time bookseller and publishing professional exploring kinks and other fun things with a wider audience. I am by no means a writer but I have a good time. Working on some new stuff - I've sort of hit a bottleneck of different projects and haven't been able to focus on m...