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by Probus888
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Anonymousover 1 year agoGreat end to the series! 5*. So what will become of Ardys and Viridis and their children by the monster now?
Anonymousover 1 year agoWhat a waste. You spent a huge amount of writing on a pointless sex scene in the prior chapter and this one was just rushed and cobbled together.
Probus888over 1 year agoAuthorTo anon who wrote, 'this one was just rushed and cobbled together'. Thanks for the feedback and sorry if you didn't enjoy the ending but I think it was the only ending possible. I've got an idea for a sequel but I guess you won't be reading that!
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Probus888@Probus888I write stories mostly for my pleasure with a plot-line and I prefer stories which have believable motivations. My main focus seems to be erotic horror, somewhat inspired by H.P. Lovecraft, but I do write in other categories, too. Yes, I know tentacle-monsters etc. aren't real...
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