by B00kl0ver314
That was really well written. I'd love to read a second part but with more attention on the sex itself. There was a good build up but a slightly rushed conclusion - which makes sense considering Jacob's desperate need to fill his neighbour. Hoping for that slow and sensual round two...maybe three and four? Ella seems kinky, I'd like to read more about her and her toys too.
Thank you both for you nice comments!
I am working on a second part
Xx Hannah
Good story and a pleasure to have helped you a bit.
Disappointed as there are a couple of things I missed -sorry about those.
Look forward to your next one.
Cute. What he called this story cute too? That's two tonight he's called cute. So Hannah, I like cute. I like believable too. I like that you didn't get over descriptive of body parts. What they do is more important than size. So here we are back to.cute. Please don't hate me. I'll read one more before bedtime..
Dear Ravey19 and GoofyRob
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my story!
I enjoyed writing it too
Xx Hannah
Would love to hear another neighbor story, or continuation to this one. Loved the story!
good descriptive writer ... story needs more length and complexity but, as an interlude, it was excellent