All Comments on 'The Hotel 02 (Version 1)'

by lil_one89

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
to soon

it doesn't happen like that though it is beautiful to think it could

it was pleasant to read

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 10 years ago
Excellent work!

Especially as you are new to writing erotica - this was a wonderful story, in both versions - you must write more for us. Thank you and welcome to Literotica; you are going to be very popular!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The romantic side

Finally, anauthor who knows how to bring it out in writing. Well done! Five stars!

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