All Comments on 'The Hotel Bar'

Omg that was incredible

What a story, excellent writing. You’re a true story teller!

Very hot story. Would love for it to continue. I think Clay might want some ass play in addition to a repeat from the first time.

Terrific story. I enjoyed your approach and his mindset. Jacks was a perfect guide leading Clay where he really wanted to go.

I may have to make my way to Columbus. Hopefully, my wife won't mind.

Every time I think you can’t possibly top your last story, you do. Looking forward to the next chapter.

WOW, you captured all the feelings and emotions of first-time gay sex perfectly. This wonderful story brought back so many memories, the first blow job I got from a man and then the first time sucked a cock. Can't wait to find out what happened with this reunion. MLF

Do not like the writing style, gave up.

Excellent way of expression ....

Love to befriended by Jackson

What a spectacular seduction. On to Columbus…

I appreciate all feedback, but I learn the most from critical feedback. So, Anonymous (“Do not like the writing style, gave up”), can you please provide additional feedback, namely what specifically about the style do you not like? The fact it was written 100% from one person’s perspective, all one sided?

It was almost a 5 but a bit long and to short of an ending. I'll wait to .......be continued.

Although I’m not a regular reader on this site, I’ve read your stories before and was pleased to see this new one a little while ago. I truly enjoy the way you set the stage and tone, and though this latest tale is told a little differently than what I recall about the others, it is every bit as enjoyable. Thank you.

My only disappointment is Jacks' muscles were not built naturally. Even it's dad bod, I prefer Clay's body.

Well written, great pacing, it kept me engrossed

Very cool, a departure from the norm! Your writing style always pulls me in. Just a different first person perspective this time. And every bit as good. With that said, I’ll be waiting for the next installment!