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by Paladin1188

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy5 months ago

Continuing danger!

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Fgreen79029Fgreen790294 months ago

Got all the way to the 2nd page of this chapter before I decided I couldn't take any more. I got tired of the mental gymnastics required to get past all of your syntax and gender blunders. Not really a native English speaker, are ya?

I'll go look for something else that isn't so F'd up.

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I have written a variety of material but would welcome collaborations. I do read my comments if you wish to leave them. As Paul McCartney said, " I wanna be a paperback writer'

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