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Click hereLast night was an opportunity for it to happen. I was turned on by the fact you were turned on and I do think Mark and Kieth are good-looking. Adam has always had the hots for me and wanted his wicked way. I have to admit that might have happened with or without your consent.
"Just talking about it is making me wet and" she reached over to my hardening cock 'it's turning you on too"
"Was it really no partners for the dinner?" I asked
"No Darling. I wrote that memo myself. I had been planning it for a few weeks now. I knew you would let me go and the nice thing was I didn't have to force you
"I don't know if I could handle it again" I said
"You will" she laughed. Scratching my erection with her nails under the table.
- COMMENTS
Skywriter12001almost 2 years agoKind of out there but loved the theme of it. So hot for a wife to make her hubby watch her enjoy her self. Super hot. Thanks
thecarolinadreameralmost 2 years agoIt’s your story, so you can write it your way, but I have to wonder why anyone would want to attach their pen name to something like this. As for a comment on the quality of the story, I’ll just have to say I agree 26thNC.
You haven’t asked for constructive criticism but Lord knows you can used some, and ready or not I’m gonna offer a bit.
If you are going to turn the wife into a complete slut for goodness sake lay a background. You have Wifey acting completely loving and reasonable until time for the party.
Then in minutes she turns into a complete bitch, while Hubby is showing no sign of wanting to share wifey, but she somehow knows he really does.
Most readers are willing to suspend belief and buy into a story line, and in some form or another they will identify with one of the characters. (Think back to the days the preteen you read westerns and imagined you were the good guy who kissed the girl and rode the horse off into the sunset.) Do you think anybody would want to be the pathetic Hubby in this story?
Anyway, I gave you a 2 because you did take time to write, and that deserves something.
If you want to salvage something out of this you still have an opening to have husband grow a pair and raise some hell with both lovers and wife, since the only cuck tendencies Hubby has shown has been in the mind of the slut.
Good Luck cd
