All Comments on 'The Hottest Fire Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the story. 5's don't exist in my world, but you have a 4 and a hearty "Well done!" I do have one question, though. Where does a fellow go about finding a Gabrielle?

tinfoilhattinfoilhatabout 1 year ago

This was quite a good story. The only fault I could find is, the story is way too short.

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