All Comments on 'The House Group Leader's Wife Pt. 07'

by The_Veil_of_Isis

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DingbatwizardDingbatwizard6 months ago

"That's more like it," said Meiling. "Don't treat me as if I'm an invalid."

It’s lines like this that set your work far above most of the stories we get here. Please keep giving!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

There aren’t many stories that make me laugh out loud and then cum, but this was one of them. 6*

HoumafanHoumafan6 months ago

I love the way you craft your characters from a female perspective. They are all so relatable. Okay, I’ve never met a Meiling (but that’s probably the sheltered life I live), but I have come across plenty of Harpers, not least during my years living in Portland. I really hope you have more to share. You are so creative and a really great writer.

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I am in my mid/late twenties and love painting and handcrafting. I have recently started writing again, encouraged by the success of a short story in an online competition. I took a creative writing minor at college. I am straight but bicurious.