All Comments on 'The Houseguest'

The story was good enough but did not like the ending. Don't know why, it just struck me wrong.

I enjoyed your story up until the ending. The ending was terrible, but maybe it was a warning to married men that play with other men.

Good story until the last few paragraphs

The story started like a fun upbeat story of discovery and sexy fun but the ending was totally depressing and Ted, the visitor, is all the way around cruel to someone who had opened his house up as a family friend. You just don't do that to people, much less fuck the wife and ruin the marriage. This is not a good ending and seems to be awkward to handle. I give it a very low rating and prefer not to see any more like this.

This was a great — and hot — story... until the end. There was no need for Libby to run off with Ted: Libby and her husband could’ve shared Ted’s cock. Or, if there was to be a split, he — not Libby — should’ve gone off with Ted. Libby would then be deprived of not only her husband’s cock but Ted’s cock as well: it’s hot when a woman’s starved of cock!

......aren't alphas. And as such we just don't understand. I lost my wife to an alpha couple - the wife seduced her and liberated her from my tame, vanilla lovemaking. Then her husband fucked my wife into a different reality altogether. Alphas are just different from the rest of us.

I love stories about formerly-straight guys who get gayed. In some of them, the bent dude somehow ends up as a top, seduced by a twinky bottom. I prefer the other kind, where the new guy is dominated and ends up a cocksocket. I like them best of all when the first-timer is embarrassed by his submission, and humiliated when outed to others - family, friends, etc.

So that's all to say that this plot is right up my, uh, alley. But the ending was criminally rushed. You can't go from feeding your husband a dirty pussy to I'm leaving you forever in one sentence.

You've written other stories much better.

You might enjoy some of my stories, not that I'm the best writer, either.

Most of your recent stories are degrading gay people.

The ending suck. So she just ends her marriage after the man she invites seduces her husband. One time really. Ted bi to so what the hell. And why did lose everything, Ted was rich. They both cheated the same night this makes no sense. She never love him no one flips in less than 24 hours. And so one night Ted wants to be with this woman forever. Just stupid story.