All Comments on 'The Houseguest'

and not just for the narrator. I would have preferred if you had brought the story to a proper climax. As it sits, it is just one long tease.

Which is really unfortunate because it was well written and enjoyable up to that point.

I think you got us hooked. Now you can pull us in deeper. Not sure where you go with this start. Maybe Jada fucks dad as well. Mom is sure to be ravished by Jada. Does Jada have a Trans girlfriend to share? You write with great style. I would like more details. Anyway you certainly earned a five. I just published a story as well. Give my story a look and give me some feedback. Look forward to part 2, 3 etc.

Please. I need more.

Please do continue -- you can't leave Kathy or us hanging and I am sure Jada knows just how to satisfy all of the sluts at the Lindstrom household. You are an excellent writer and have a deliciously crafted storyline.

This is a very promising beginning for an erotic thread. I can "hardly" wait for the next chapter. You've gotten my "interest" up, and your description of Jada is extremely arousing for me. Thanks so much for sharing this thread. Hopefully, you're working on the next chapter.......... xoxoxo 💋👙💖

Great set up for whatever comes next. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Jada should fuck n knock up the mother behind kendras back

Great story, hoping there is more

Your writing style is exceptional and seductive as hell.

Can you please spend a little more time on describing Ms.Lindstrom's physical features.

I feel like you could of done more with that. Kendra and Jada got their bios but not so much with Kathy.

We know she's hot but give us some details and PLEASE don't make her perfect.

Let her age haunt her at times.

As for a Ch.2 idea, can Jada tease Kathy some more by messaging her feet and sucking her toes one by one?

You would do wonders with that seduction scene.

Amazing work, can't wait for Ch.2!

Jada could take control of them both, and end up in an incest like threesome. With a strap-on and Jada big cock. I could almost see both of them on their knees begging for Jada's cock and her to use them how ever she wants. Good story so far, for not having almost no sex. LOL

loved this story, just wish there was more

Продолжения! Начало захватывающее!

This is a new genre for me: was really enjoying this and it is paced just right, love the build up. But then you leave us hanging ...can't wait for part 2. Mum is such a sexy slut but she needs to watch Kenrda and Jada before taking part herself

Can't wait to see where you go with this, but hopefully ends with Jada fucking everyone in the house together.

So good to see you writing on Literotica again!

Cant wait for more

Ohmygosh. Wow! That picked up speed and intensity at the end, didn't it? Verrrry well done. I urge you to give us more.

где же продолжение?

Please right a second part 🙏🏻

Now I know how Kathy felt.... we need more to this story!

I love your story. Can't wait to see what you do with it when you return to it.

just got started!!!

there should be more to this story.

It's amazing! The Story "My Daughter's Special Friend" is the same story, somewhat word for word by "CB_Grl_Dani".... I wonder which one is real and who the real fake is????

Leave ur husband if your going to cheat